So I bothered to watch this and have no idea who this girl is, but she seems to think that her opinions are how cinematic structure should work, particularly with regards to character arc. Every character should change during the film? That's both unrealistic, not how story works, and simply not feasible. You don't get massive change in individuals over the course of a few days.tk for tu juan said:
The last minute of this makes me laugh and is a good point
but of course the plans have to be stolen due to the OT script
A character also doesn't have to have some big fundamental change to have a character arc. That's actually much more the exception than the rule, most characters have their beliefs challenged or face some obstacle and must defeat that and stay strong in their belief. That occurred for most of the characters in the film.
She's also just plain inaccurate in most of her analysis. She saw no journey for Chirrut, while in reality he and Baze start as members of their sect not wanting to be involved in the rebellion yet choose to go on the mission. We then see his belief in the Force evolve over the film and it becomes a critical moment. She said we never saw any examples of Cassion's willingness to kill except for his first sequence while ignoring that he shoots a rebellion soldier during the riot/rebel attack in the city. She doesn't like that Jyn saved the little girl because her character didn't need to be redeemed at that point, but it makes perfect sense that Jyn would have compassion for a child on their own in a chaotic situation.
Most of the rest of her critique seems to be either ignoring that things may have occurred that we didn't see (she didn't feel like Bohdi knew Galen well enough to have felt the need to go on the mission, ignoring that some events might have built their relationship prior to him taking the transport ship) or thinking that she had better ideas for how scenes should have gone. Um, ok. You wanting something to be different doesn't mean it's not good.
So, yeah. There's your rebuttal.