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As has been mentioned, I love Sturgill and know you don't. I don't want to get into a pissing match, but can you tell me from a 'technical standpoint' why you don't feel his songs hold up? I'm looking for something objective rather than you just don't care for him, which is certainly within anyone's right.
As a songwriter, I don't find his songs to be well written. Keep in mind, I view his work through the lens of a country writer - in my view, he meanders a lot, strays off point, and sometimes leaves vague lines unresolved.
An example of what I mean, in "Oh Sarah"...
Oh Sarah, here we go againI can't get past the pain of what I want to say to youI'm too old now to learn how to let you inSo I'll run away just like I always doShe said if there's something I should know then tell me nowBefore I go and give my heart awaySo I can get on with my lifeYou can go on with your strifeWish you'd speak the words those eyes are trying to sayOk, so I read/hear that and my mind goes to "what strife exactly? What words are her eyes trying to say?"
And if he's going to "go and give my heart away", then why did he say "I'm too old now to learn how to let you in, so I'll run away like I always do". If you always run away, it's going to be pretty hard to give your heart away, isn't it? It also bothers me when songs straddle the fence between being poetic ("Sometimes this life feels like a big old dream, I'm floating around on a cloud inside") and being conversational ("There's going to be times that I gotta go away, but don't worry baby I'll come home"). In my view, a song lyric is either a poem or a conversation...if you're writing a conversational song, you should never put a lyric in that doesn't sound like something you'd actually say in a conversation. And oh, by the way, didn't he just say in the previous verse that he was going to get on with his life...kind of hard to do that if you come home.
I get that Sturgill isn't a "country" artist, but he's been touted as being the future of country music by some, and so I look at his work from that perspective. But just for the sake of discussion, let's look at a Jason Isbell lyric by comparison, since they are pretty much in the same arena.
"I moved into this room, if you could call it that, a week ago.I never do what I'm supposed to do.I hardly even know my name anymore.When no one calls it out, it kinda vanishes away.I can't get to sleep at night. The parking lot's so loud and bright.The A.C. hasn't worked in twenty years.Probably never made a single person cold,but I can't say the same for me. I've done it many times."Everything that is in there works perfectly. It's crystal clear what he's talking about, the entire lyric reads like something you could actually imagine someone saying out loud.
Let me be clear, I'm not trying to knock Sturgill. I just don't care for what he does, because as a songwriter his songs aren't well written from a craft standpoint. I respect his work, just not something I'd care to listen to, because I'm a lyric-driven listener. To my ears, the greatest track/groove/melody in the world falls to pieces if it's paired with a substandard lyric. It's just the way I came up listening to and trying to write songs. When I moved to Nashville, it was the common opinion that if you couldn't play a song with just a guitar (or piano) and have it knock people out, then the song wasn't worth a damn.
One of the best comments I ever heard regarding musical taste and opinions on songs/artists was "there's a reason why Baskin-Robbins has 31 flavors." Everybody has different taste, and gravitates towards different things. That's why I try to stay away from giving opinions along the lines of "that song sucks" or "_____ is a crappy artist". That's may be my opinion, but stating it as if it were fact would be pretty arrogant and naive on my part. Sorry for being so verbose, I just thought you asked a very valid question and wanted to give you the best, most complete answer I could.