bobinator said:
This is kind of what I mean though by the writers fumbling a couple of times. It's not that it's too far fetched to make it make sense, they just didn't.
Here is my attempt.....
Note: If you saw the filming - they flew Arya in horizontally on wires for the kill. Dumb. they had no context for her getting that high. And NK was facing the tree so she did not come from there. And she seemingly would have had to have passed the WWs behind him......
Well on that note.... i kind of had a vivid half sleeping dream last night and in my head it went differently..... might have been better (????) although a lot is the same.
Naturally I assume a little more proximity of people here then maybe was the case, but it could have been made this way.
In my "dream" version:
We see the wights getting closer and closer to Bran, Theon fighting furiously.. until one of them manages to touch Bran and stops......the wights in the courtyard all stop. Exterior you see the NK turn and look that direction. He knows where Bran is now and raises the dead to fight Jon and so he can leave. Then Dany and Drogon save Jon with the fire... Jon proceeds to pursue the NK and WWs as he did....
Grey Worm sees Dany in trouble with Jorah and sprints for them (for his queen).
He slides through the snow/ice on his knees and slashes down like 30 wights from behind and joins Jorah with Dany between them protecting her. Jorah still goes down in the end though. Grey Worm stays with Dany.
We see the Mel and Arya prophetic discussion scene inside the castle and Arya realizes and runs off...... the Hound follows trying to keep up and protecting her 6.
Meanwhile Jon sees that Dany is protected and turns to see the WWs entering the godswood area. He takes off at a dead sprint too - to protect Bran slaying wights as he goes. He encounters Viserion and is trapped by Viserion who is still wreaking havoc outside the castle - but Gendry enters the area and while he is frozen in fear Jon escapes and Tormund comes in knocks Gendry down and out of harms way of dragon fire. Gendry and Tormund play cat and mouse with the dragon keeping him busy.
Cut to a scene of Arya going full bore parkour mode leaping, jumping, sliding, ninja style around the castle..... she flashes by Jamie and Brienne fighting on the walls who are like "wtf"......the Hound follows at a slower pace trying to keep up and protect her and just running through things or killing things in his path..... finally she leaps over the edge of the walls and......the when Hound reaches the edge looks over and says "**** that" and stops. He instead joins Jamie and Brienne ato the walls.
We see Theon in the godswood firing the last of his arrows and getting desperate as the WWs approach. A panning shot of the WWs (and you might notice a subtle flash of someone in black on the far side of the courtyard past an opening - but probably only notice it on a rewatch).....and Theon makes his desperate attack and is killed by the NK as we saw it.
The WWs and NK approach Bran.... the NK draws his spear and is smirking. But from behind Jon has entered the courtyard and is attacking from behind the WWs. They turn and form a barrier between him and the NK. Jon battles 1, 2, 3 of them killing a couple. But eventually he too is near defeat, is stabbed repeatedly, drops to his knees exhausted and bloody. They pull away his sword. The remaining WWs grab Jon and drag him to the feet of the NK. Bloody and defenseless Jon looks up at the NK while being held for the kill......
The NK turns back to Bran to deal with him first....... Bran is looking at him but then his gaze goes up....Jon is yelling "No!!!"...... a single leaf from the weirwood falls and Brans eyes follow it down to the snow at the NK feet. The NK looks down too confused, his smirk no longer there.....snow falls on him too from above.... then suddenly he looks up and Arya is crashing down from through the branches above - he catches her dagger arm and her neck like he did, she drops the blade and catches it below killing him the same way with the other hand.
The End.
It's not much different really but
1. establishes Arya's ninja mode better
2. Gives Grey Worm a bit more of a heroic redemptive moment with his queen
2. gives Jon a more immediate impact on events at the end
3. allows an understanding of how Arya got there - you can assume she swooped in from behind the tree while they were distracted by Jon's efforts and scaled it swiftly.
4. and her angle of attack from above makes sense coming down from the tree
it might give away the Arya moment a bit more i suppose - but for me it is better if it is not completely (literally) just a miracle falling out of the sky.
oh well...... i'm sure we each have our own variations we think might be better.