TLDR i know ......
imho..... a 7 episode season with just a bit more development of Dany's turn and it plays out much better.
I was really trying to work within the framework of the end point of each character here - so trying to stay true to the story assuming this was the intention via GRRM and it just needed a few things to sell it better.
I think I only add 30 minutes of runtime and a few other changes within scenes that existed.
So here is my attempt:
Ep1 - "Winterfell" 60 minsno changes as is
Ep2 - "A Knight of the Seven Kingdoms" 60 minsno changes as is
Ep3 - "The Long Night" 80 mins same runtime1. Fix the lighting so we can see better - add torches, more fire, etc.
2. And fix Arya's attack to make sense. NK reaches Bran but Jon battles through to the godswood coming in behind the WWs who turn to form a barrier to the NK. He fights a few killing 2-3 but doesn't have enough to defeat them all and he is also about to be killed. This allowed Ary's (unseen) approach from behind and she climbs the tree and the kill happens much the same way except she drops from the tree - NK grabs her, drops knife, etc.
Ep4 - "The Last of the Starks" trimmed to 60 mins (20 mins cut from the end)1. Fix the Bronn interaction - he shows up but can't kill them, they offer him double anyway cuz Tyrion promised that, bro hugs. Bronn disappears on good terms.
*Otherwise the episode proceeds as we saw with the party, battle planning, etc.up until Dany et al arrive at Dragonstone.
2. Dany flying ahead doing recon spots the iron fleet and warns her ships. Then she decides to attack the ships. But as they are diving they reveal the scorpions that were hidden beneath tarps and unleash a volley of 30+ scorpions from CLOSE range. They dodge duck dip dive and dodge but Rhaegal is still hit and mortally wounded while Dany and Drogon escape with only a minor wound. But Dany calls off the attack. The iron fleet proceeds to attack the Targ fleet as they are trying to flee. And as they sail thru the wreckage after you seem them scoop up Missandei who cannot swim and is holding onto something in fear so as not to drown.
*End of episode with dramatic Rhaegal death and Missandei captured.
Ep5 - a NEW episode titled "Betrayals" 60 mins with 20 mins from Ep 4, 20 new minutes, and 20 minutes from previous Ep 5.* these things were previously at the end of Ep. 4
- start with Dany wanting to attack immediately. Advisors tell her to wait for armies. she is pissed.
- Varys and Tyrion discussion and his treasonous thoughts
- Jamie gets word in WF and heads off to KL. but his motivation is unclear (?TBD)
- The meeting outside KL, Missandei is killed, more anger...Daenerys storms off
*new stuff about 20 mins
1. (2 min) It goes a few days (we are told, or some montage) and Dany grows tired of waiting for her armies. Her anger is seething we see in her demeanor. Refuses to talk to anyone.
2. (5 mins) Dany leaves on Drogon and flies recon seeing her armies approaching and scouting the KL defenses from high above. But she also spots someone else, a lone rider moving fast down the Kingsroad.
3. (5 mins) Upon her return she sends a small group with Grey Worm on a mission - they capture Jaime en route and Dany wants to execute him for response to Missandei but Tyrion convinces her he could be useful in negotiating Cerei/KL surrender.
4. (2 mins) Privately Dany is alone and not eating. Her thoughts on losing another Dragon and Missandei are expressed. We also see her having dreams of betrayals although fictional they are real to her and she thinks they foretell of what is coming. Her anger grows but she is more isolated than ever.
5. (5 min) Still frustrated and waiting Dany has Tyrion attempt another meeting with Qyburn - Davos sneaks him in and they meet in private beneath the RK. Tyrion offers Jaime in exchange for their surrender. Qyburn says no dice. Tyrion begs Qyburn for his brothers sake and says Cersei still loves him she is just mad but they can be exiled.
* remainder of episode is taken from first 20 minutes or so of Ep. 5 (The Bells)
- We see Varys beg jon to do the right thing, he refuses says she is their queen
- We see Varys writing letters and maybe even the poison thing but it fails
- Dany learns of Varys plot from Tyrion
- Varys is executed
- Dany expresses betrayal of Jon and Tyrions mistake on Jaime's intentions
- Tyrion visits Jaime and let's him escape
Ep6 - "The Bells" 70ish minutes (trimming the 20 mins moved to the episode above and adding maybe 10 mins).1. (2 mins) We see Dany find out about Tyrion letting Jaime escape via Grey Worm. She leaves in a fury.
Battle proceeds as we saw she torches the ships, etc. and KL gates. They attack and overwhelm them and are on the verge of them surrendering as we saw.
2. (1 min) But when the bells ring Dany is seething and just then she sees Cersei and Jaime in the parapet window of the RK. Cersei is smirking. *Dany is much closer to the RK in this version and can see them clearly.
3. (2 mins) Cersei and Jaime suddenly part and Qyburn behind them fires a last Scorpion weapon from the top of the Red Keep tower. Dany yells "DRACARYS" and Drogon disintegrates the shaft of the spear in flight with the tip clattering below him harmlessly. Qyburn start reloading the weapon.....
(mostly what we saw but a different order) Dany now takes off attacking the RK tower first and all of it as Jamie and Cersei and Qyburn and the Mountain head down the stairs and it is collapsing around them. This is what triggers Grey Worm to resume the attack as well. The Hound let's Jaime and Cersei past. Cleganebowl happens as we saw it.
4. (2 mins) Jon makes it to the RK and enters in time to see Jamie and Cersei go down the tunnels. He follows cautiously and gets there in time to see the collapse that kills Jamie and Cersei. He escapes back out the way he came.
5. (2 mins) Jon runs out of the Red Keep and signals to Dany that it is over now. She lands with Drogon but is still seething. She sees Tyrion there too now - Jon tells him Cersei and Jamie are dead and where they are and he heads into the RK. Dany snears at Tyrion visibly still angry.
At this point Dany is gone - and we've seen more than enough to convince us of that. She takes off on Drogon and proceeds to torch KL like we saw.
end of the episode the city is in ruins still
Ep7 - "The Iron Throne"80 mins mostly the same but one plot change but no added time really
Mostly as we saw it. She still gives her militaristic battle speech and talks of attacking more places, etc. Tyrion still furious because the battle was won and she did not have to torch the city. He resigns and tosses down the pin of the Hand. She promotes Grey Worm as military commander. Jon visits Tyrion. Everyone implores jon to kill her. Jon begs Dany to have mercy and let Tyrion go. Jon kills her as before but is not captured. He disappears. They know he killed her because he was the last one allowed entry. Maybe even have Grey Worm find out Jon was there and he goes to see what Drogon is angry about and sees her dead before Dragon takes off.
Now the rest plays out with the council and Bran etc. But Jon is not a captive. Tyrion is made hand to Bran, etc... the small council has discussions about the whereabouts of Drogon and also Jon. Nobody knows. The Unsullied and Dothraki decide to leave. Last scene is Jon showing up alone at the wall and greeted by Tormund and Ghost reunion. He and the wildlings leave for the north on their own. Jon didn't want to rule anything and he is not a Stark and he is the last Targ but he wants none of it. And it removes any Night's Watch and Castle Black stuff.
I don't know - while Dany's justification and turn are better laid out here then you have the issue of whether it is enough to justify Jon killing her. she would have to be obviously borderline insane i suppose.