StringerBell said:
maybe its stockholm syndrome but im starting to find myself agreeing with bobinator
lol.
well there is nothing wrong with saying it could have been better - although many of the proposed improvements I find even more ham handed then the original problems.
even i think it could have been done better.
take the idea proposed by a few that it's Tyrion's treason and Jamie's release that triggers her... a few people debated this a few ways a few pages back and how to play that out.
To me that's entirely appropriate and can be made even simpler.
Assume Dany does not YET know about Jamie's release - but given what she said to Tyrion about his next failure would be his last ......everything proceeds as we saw up until the dragon is landed and the bells are about to be rung and the army drops their swords, etc..... the only differences are:
1. make Dany close enough to see the Red Keep clearly to identify people
2. back in the Red Keep before that we have seen Jamie and Cersei reunion (so this happens a little earlier he made it up there before the real destruction began)
Now
at that moment when Dany is waiting... Jamie and Cersei walk out to the parapet or whatever overlooking the city and Dany sees them, and Cersei smirksthe bells ring and Dany looks around, the army is tense but not just walking away, the bells are ringing but nobody is coming out, could be a trapshe thinks and you see on her face - that sonnofa***** (Tyrion) let Jamie go and starts to get angry - maybe even glances back to where Tyrion is and mutters "TYRION"just then Qyburn had one last scorpion on the upper levels behind Jamie and Cersei and they part and he fires at Drogon a sitting duck.Dany yells DRACARYS and Drogon torches the projectile heading right at him disintegrating the shaft part and the spear part falls clattering to the ground.She looks up really angry nowthe troops saw Cersei fire and grab for their weapons as Greyworm launches his spear and the fight resumesDany takes off on Drogon right for the Red Keep as they are reloading the scorpion but Jamie and Cersei run and head down the stairs.Dany torches the Red Keep where they were and begins destroying it around them. then as they continue down she keeps destroying more and more in furious anger. She starts destroying the city as there was no surrender in her eyesthe Cleganebowl still takes place on the stairs, etc. Jamie and Cersei go past it on their way down and are underground so Dany never knows where ... even let the collapse happen and kill them.So this is just making her anger at betrayal even more obvious but it didn't take much.
I never had a problem with the idea that it could have been better, I had a problem with you could not see that coming. I could but this does make it more obvious I suppose - but definitely more justified too.
That treason did happen - and I still wonder if she knew ahead of time.
It may be a cheap copout that they even have her say in E6 that she knew about Jamie and that was on Tyrion and it's the Lannister way and Cersei was not surrendering, etc. Would not surprise me if they try to justify it after the fact. They may have simply wanted the shock value and then to justify it later. Poor execution if so but maybe.