Love Boat in Space?

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The Porkchop Express
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2:33p, 4/3/24
The following is an actual paragraph from an actual book that I have been hired to edit. It's non-fiction.

The Space Economy grows from $1 trillion to $100 trillion. Spacecraft will take millions of tourists, entrepreneurs, and explorers to rotating Love Boat in Space, in minutes, communities on the Moon in hours, and Mars in days. Starships, like the Star Trek Enterprise, will take millions of people to hundreds of Earth-like planets orbiting the stars in the Milky Way Galaxy in weeks.
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In reply to The Porkchop Express • 2:42p, 4/3/24
That's a pretty broad view of non-fiction.
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In reply to The Porkchop Express • 3:25p, 4/3/24
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rotating Love Boat in Space
This has got to be a swingers vacation.
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4:20p, 4/3/24
I think my editorial comment would be why don't you re-write this when you aren't high.
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In reply to PlanoAg98 • 4:21p, 4/3/24
Space Swingers motto

"If it happened in Space it never took place"
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In reply to Flashdiaz • 4:23p, 4/3/24
Flashdiaz said:
Space Swingers motto

"If it happened in Space it never took place"


the cosmic 'not gay if you're under way'
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5:07p, 4/3/24
The porno has probably already been done.

I ain't looking it up.
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In reply to Flashdiaz • 6:47p, 4/3/24
Flashdiaz said:
Space Swingers motto

"If it happened in Space it never took place"
More like..."If it happened in Space everybody gets the facial!"
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In reply to The Porkchop Express • 6:56a, 4/4/24
The Porkchop Express said:
The following is an actual paragraph from an actual book that I have been hired to edit. It's non-fiction.

The Space Economy grows from $1 trillion to $100 trillion. Spacecraft will take millions of tourists, entrepreneurs, and explorers to rotating Love Boat in Space, in minutes, communities on the Moon in hours, and Mars in days. Starships, like the Star Trek Enterprise, will take millions of people to hundreds of Earth-like planets orbiting the stars in the Milky Way Galaxy in weeks.

...to boldly sow where no man has has sown before!
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8:03a, 4/4/24
Thanks for putting the Love Boat theme in my head. Those of us old enough to have heard it won't forgive you for it for a while.
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In reply to MouthBQ98 • 8:07a, 4/4/24
Can you stay awake long enough to watch Fantasy Island?
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In reply to MouthBQ98 • 8:36a, 4/4/24
MouthBQ98 said:
Thanks for putting the Love Boat theme in my head. Those of us old enough to have heard it won't forgive you for it for a while.
My wife is 7-1/2 years younger than me and I had to show her old episodes of both The Love Boat and Fantasy Island for her to believe that they had been actual shows on network TV.
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In reply to maroon barchetta • 8:46a, 4/4/24
maroon barchetta said:
Can you stay awake long enough to watch Fantasy Island?
I'd be worried about that in real life now, too. It would probably have a little person all dressed in leather, saying "Ooh, de pain, boss, de pain!" every episode.
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8:49a, 4/4/24
I wondered what happened in Ten Forward late at night
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In reply to The Porkchop Express • 9:01a, 4/4/24
The Porkchop Express said:
MouthBQ98 said:
Thanks for putting the Love Boat theme in my head. Those of us old enough to have heard it won't forgive you for it for a while.
My wife is 7-1/2 years younger than me and I had to show her old episodes of both The Love Boat and Fantasy Island for her to believe that they had been actual shows on network TV.
Congratulations!
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In reply to The Porkchop Express • 9:05a, 4/4/24
The Porkchop Express said:
MouthBQ98 said:
Thanks for putting the Love Boat theme in my head. Those of us old enough to have heard it won't forgive you for it for a while.
My wife is 7-1/2 years younger than me and I had to show her old episodes of both The Love Boat and Fantasy Island for her to believe that they had been actual shows on network TV.


This is how you humble brag
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In reply to The Porkchop Express • 5:28a, 4/5/24
The Porkchop Express said:
The following is an actual paragraph from an actual book that I have been hired to edit. It's non-fiction.

The Space Economy grows from $1 trillion to $100 trillion. Spacecraft will take millions of tourists, entrepreneurs, and explorers to rotating Love Boat in Space, in minutes, communities on the Moon in hours, and Mars in days. Starships, like the Star Trek Enterprise, will take millions of people to hundreds of Earth-like planets orbiting the stars in the Milky Way Galaxy in weeks.
That paragraph is a grammatical train wreck. You've got your work cut out for you.
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In reply to Tanya 93 • 6:46a, 4/5/24
Tanya 93 said:
I wondered what happened in Ten Forward late at night
When exactly is "late at night" in space?
plus ça change, plus c'est la même chose
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In reply to The Kraken • 10:58a, 4/5/24
The Kraken said:
Tanya 93 said:
I wondered what happened in Ten Forward late at night
When exactly is "late at night" in space?
Space always confuses me. It's never cloudy, the sun is always out, yet it always is dark.

Really makes you think.
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In reply to Sea Speed • 11:01a, 4/5/24
Sea Speed said:
Flashdiaz said:
Space Swingers motto

"If it happened in Space it never took place"


the cosmic 'not gay if you're under way'


In space, no one can hear you cream.
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In reply to Tanya 93 • 11:02a, 4/5/24
Tanya 93 said:
I wondered what happened in Ten Forward late at night

They made a plot point of it in "The Orville," but you know some freaky stuff went down in the holodeck.
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In reply to Hehateme1 • 12:03p, 4/5/24
Hehateme1 said:
The Kraken said:
Tanya 93 said:
I wondered what happened in Ten Forward late at night
When exactly is "late at night" in space?
Space always confuses me. It's never cloudy, the sun is always out, yet it always is dark.

Really makes you think.


Yet there are tornados in space.
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In reply to The Porkchop Express • 12:09p, 4/5/24
The Porkchop Express said:
MouthBQ98 said:
Thanks for putting the Love Boat theme in my head. Those of us old enough to have heard it won't forgive you for it for a while.
My wife is 7-1/2 years younger than me and I had to show her old episodes of both The Love Boat and Fantasy Island for her to believe that they had been actual shows on network TV.
We have rules here.
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In reply to Tanya 93 • 12:10p, 4/5/24
Tanya 93 said:
I wondered what happened in Ten Forward late at night
There was a lot of Whoppi in there.
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In reply to LeonardSkinner • 12:47p, 4/5/24
LeonardSkinner said:
Tanya 93 said:
I wondered what happened in Ten Forward late at night

They made a plot point of it in "The Orville," but you know some freaky stuff went down in the holodeck.



Very freaky
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In reply to Tanya 93 • 1:22p, 4/5/24
Tanya 93 said:
LeonardSkinner said:
Tanya 93 said:
I wondered what happened in Ten Forward late at night

They made a plot point of it in "The Orville," but you know some freaky stuff went down in the holodeck.



Very freaky


It was all Reg.
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In reply to StinkyPinky • 7:04p, 4/5/24
StinkyPinky said:
Hehateme1 said:
The Kraken said:
Tanya 93 said:
I wondered what happened in Ten Forward late at night
When exactly is "late at night" in space?
Space always confuses me. It's never cloudy, the sun is always out, yet it always is dark.

Really makes you think.


Yet there are tornados in space.
My mind is blown

I knew of black holes
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