This is so poorly written. It screams " i really hated English and writing in high school, and now I are one…"

Terrible flow; terrible composition. Guess SDS has no real editors, or couldn't care less.

https://www.saturdaydownsouth.com/tamu-football/jace-sternberger-lands-with-new-nfl-team-as-journeyman-season-continues/

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What you are missing is that this publication is one of just a handful that even covered Jace's being fired, hired to an inferior position, and then getting instantly hired back to his original position on another team.

He even included all his NFL stats. ALL of them. And mentioned his substance abuse issue from his rookie year.




No one outside of the Sternberger family and the WFT care. We (Aggies) don't even care that much, but we do wish Jace well.

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FAIL

This thread title made me think of Keith Joseph and Derek Farmer. I guess I'm a millennial-boomer.

Weird, random thread. I'm normally very critical of published writing, and was expecting much worse when I clicked on the link. But the writing here is utterly unremarkable. "Flow"...lol...it's a tiny blurb containing a small collection of basic facts. Not sure why you were expecting a masterpiece narrative on this topic, especially from a blog.

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Weird, random thread. I'm normally very critical of published writing, and was expecting much worse when I clicked on the link. But the writing here is utterly unremarkable. "Flow"...lol...it's a tiny blurb containing a small collection of basic facts. Not sure why you were expecting a masterpiece narrative on this topic, especially from a blog.

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No kidding. I was expecting an essay not a few bullet points.

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This thread title made me think of Keith Joseph and Derek Farmer. I guess I'm a millennial-boomer.

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I remember thinking if we could get Farmer's athleticism into Joseph's body, we'd really have something.

I also remember attending a team practice when I was a student and seeing Bryce Reed run the ball. I have never seen, before or since, a better example of the human embodiment of a bowling ball. Then we moved him to defensive tackle.

Keith Joseph aka "Black Jesus" was a specimen. I had a class with Oschlor Flemming (RB from around that time) and Oschlor was 5'8" 205lbs. Keith would be in a class near ours and that dude looked like he stepped out of a bodybuilding competition every day.