Application Essays ?

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canadianAg
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Hoping for some advice from others more experienced with the application process. I'm reading through my BIL's applications. He suffers from a few chronic conditions. In one essay, he mostly focuses on the conditions and overcoming etc... But then in several other essays, he references "his diagnosis", or "his condition" etc... without any additional expansion.

My advice was he should specify the diagnosis or condition in each essay and maybe what that means, even if just a quick sentence, but not to assume everyone is reading the same essay's etc...

But he's also received other advice to not repeat anything.

Any opinions here?
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canadianAg
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To be honest, this is more to help settle a debate. He's applying to A&M, UT, and rice. He'll be auto admit for A&M and ut, so this isn't going to make or break him, just curious if anyone knows what's recommended.
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I always tell my clients to make yourself as 3 dimensional as possible meaning you should have as little of overlap as possible. That includes resume, essays, and reference letters.


HECUBUS
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Our son is going through this a second time. The steaks are higher, we are going to prep to help all we can and get reasonable help. I can find services from $4-20k. Applications and secondaries are going to cost $10k. It's such a ridiculous racket. Academics are insanely competitive.
Kaniro
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HECUBUS said:

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We were slackers and left it up to our kid. That turned out fine also. I'm an engineer. I would not take any essay advice from an engineer outside of opinions on paid help.


Thank you for your help, now I will know and study all the material.
agnerd
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Reviewer will read and score the essays. They usually do them back-to-back, but not always. Depends who's running the show, but sometimes one reviewer will review all the first essays and another will review all the second essays to try to get a more fair evaluation. DEFINITELY mention what the condition is and a sentence about the symptoms and challenges. Essays should be able to be scored individually and shouldn't reference previous essays.
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Kaniro said:

HECUBUS said:

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We were slackers and left it up to our kid. That turned out fine also. I'm an engineer. I would not take any essay advice from an engineer outside of opinions on paid help.


Thanks for the information!
Houstonag
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Proud of my grandson who wrote his own essay. I was impressed. He got accepted the first day the letters went out in Mays.
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