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Want the TRANSFORMERS script? Here it is. Plus new design pics...

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TCTTS
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I've only read 3/4 of it (don't want to spoil the ending), but if anyone wants to take a look at the script, this is the FIRST DRAFT (dated February 28, 2006) with the current writers' revisions. Filming began three months later in May, and this thing has gone through quite a few re-writes in that time (still by Kurtzman and Orci), so expect what you read in this draft to be pretty much 85% of what you'll see come July. Same characters, same plot structure, a lot of the same scenes.

I seriously doubt the powers that be are patrolling the message boards of an Aggie sports website, but still - I have no idea how long this link I've created will be up. It's a downloadable .pdf file and, by the way, the title "Prime Directive" is used in the same way "Red Sun" or "Intimidation Game" was used for Superman Returns and Batman Begins, respectively - to keep the attention away. So yeah, here ya go...

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=JDO9ABOQ


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CHARACTERS:


- SAM WITWICKY (Shai LaBeouf)





- MIKAELA BANES (Megan Fox)





- SERGEANT WILLIAM LENNOX (Josh Duhamel)





- STAFF SERGEANT EPPS (Tyrese Gibson)





- SECRETARY OF DEFENSE KELLER (Jon Voight)





- MAGGIE MARCONI (Rachael Taylor)





- AGENT SIMMONS (John Turturro)





- RON WITWICKY (Kevin Dunn)





- ADMIRAL BRIGHAM (Chris Ellis)





- BOBBY BOLIVIA (Bernie Mac)







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TCTTS
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AUTOBOTS (5)





- OPTIMUS PRIME











- BUMBLEBEE













- RATCHET









- IRONHIDE









- JAZZ





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DECEPTICONS (8)





- MEGATRON - Cybertronian Jet









- STARSCREAM - F-22 Raptor Jet


(toy prototype, not complete final design)



- BRAWL







- BLACKOUT ("VORTEX" in first draft - same Transformer we briefly see stomping the Mars Rover in the teaser trailer)









- SCORPONOK - Attached to Blackout/Helicopter





- BARRICADE ("DEVASTATOR" in first draft)







- BONECRUSHER







- FRENZY ("SOUNDWAVE" in first draft) - No Pics / Small, Infiltrator

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TRANSFORMERS hits theaters July 4, 2007.




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AgMarauder04
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You rock!
boogieman
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You do rock.

These will make some great toys too!
yoshi
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That camaro is badass
TCTTS
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No problem, guys. I'd love to hear what others think of the script. The verdict is still out for me - it's a little cheesy and cliche in parts, but overall a pretty good read. Then again, this is just a first draft.
NoACDamnit
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quote:
it's a little cheesy and cliche in parts,


Need I remind you this is a film about giant space robots that turn into cars?

And wow, I'm actually downloading something from megaupload that isn't porn.
AgMarauder04
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bearamedic99
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why can't VW fork up the money so bumblebee can stay a bug? WTG, losers.

& I'll whine about Ratchet no longer being an ambulance.

Freakin sweet to see this thing flesh out though. I'll watch the script instead of reading it.
Sazerac
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I'm sorry, but this has disaster writen all over it.
AgMarauder04
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This movie is gonna be awesome.
bearamedic99
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the decepticon toys will be way more cool than the autobots. Unless the A-bots break out that Robotech looking red & white jet.
Keegan99
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Haven't had a chance to read the script yet, but a few comments on the pics:

1) The robots are way overdesigned. I'm sorry, but Optimus as a 'bot looks hideous - as does every other 'bot.

2) Why is a decepticon a cop car? That's doesn't fit the mold of what the two sides should be.

[This message has been edited by Keegan99 (edited 8/23/2006 9:23p).]
Mameluke
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i was thinking the same thing about how overdesigned they look
TCTTS
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A Decepticon is a cop car because that's exactly what they do... deceive. By posing as something people trust, it's able do things and infiltrate places it's not normally supposed to be. To me, that fits EXACTLY what a Decepticon is all about. It makes perfect sense in the script.

And as for the designs, yeah I agree about them being overdesigned, but I'm going to reserve judgement til I see them in motion on the screen.

[This message has been edited by TCTTS (edited 8/24/2006 12:37a).]
bearamedic99
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I see the original voice of Optimus Prime is doing his voice (he's been Eeyore for a while) but the guy who I will forever picture as Cobra Commander and Starscream has passed on.
True Anomaly
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Wow....I'm interested in this now.

"Ya gotta love livin', baby, 'cause dyin's a PAIN IN THE ASS!" -Frank Sinatra
bearamedic99
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wow, just read about this Frank Welker guy who did 8 of the original 14 decepticon voices and has been in countless cartoons. He's rumored to be megatron again.
Keegan99
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quote:
A Decepticon is a cop car because that's exactly what they do... decept. By posing as something people trust, it's able do things and infiltrate places it's not normally supposed to be. To me, that fits EXACTLY what a Decepticon is all about. It makes perfect sense in the script.


Come on, that's a stretch and you know it

In the original Transformers, vehicles like police cars, fire trucks, and ambulances were always Autobots.

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Mameluke
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A Decepticon is a cop car because that's exactly what they do... decept.


decept? i think you mean deceive...
TCTTS
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Haha, yes... I am a moron. I knew that didn't sound right.
bearamedic99
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what's with the tank? It looks like there's a turret on top of the turret.
AgMarauder04
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1. I wish the bots would have simply resembled the cartoon versions
2. If they don't have the old school transforming sound, I'm gonna be pissed.
98Ag99Grad
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"Autobots wage their battle to destroy the evil forces of... the Decepticons!"
CoolaidWade
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I think the orginial Transformers movies may have been the first movie I was ever introduced to a swear word.

And I turned out pretty fu'ed up so draw your own conclusions.
GiveEmHellBill
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Bumblebee is supposed to be the Autobot scout. It makes more sense for him to be a vehicle with some speed.

And thank God they didn't name LeBouf's character "Spike."
Sesh 96
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As long as they keep the theme song from the original 80s movie I'm cool.

"You got the touch...You got the power"
TCTTS
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Just added newly-released pics of Megatron... and this is getting kind of rediculous. Not even a faint resemblence to the old-school Megatron. I understand not making him turn into a gun (cause that never really made any sense to begin with), but this is just plain stupid.
Bacon
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sheesh, looks like a bad Giger sculpture
Smittyfubar
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Thanks TCTTS. Because of you, I was forced to download the script and read it all last night. Now I am tired as hell becasue I got no sleep. Thanks a lot!
















I loved it though and cannot wait till 4th of July next year. I keep telling my fiance that we are going to be first in line if it means having to camp out for hours.

She said no way. We'll go to the first feature but won't wait for hours.

I told her just because it's not my little pony or care bears the movie, is no reason for her to talk sheet. I then slapped her so now we will get to be first in line.
Smittyfubar
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I'm just curious as to why they don't name the tank Brawl as that is what he was originally.
Mameluke
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megatron looks like a stainless steel swamp thing
ElCheAg
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WTF! Do you have to download that software to get access to the PDF file????

Can one of y'all just e-mail me the PDF file????

Thanks!

[This message has been edited by ElCheAg (edited 8/24/2006 11:14a).]
TCTTS
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Added a YouSendIt link for the file, but it'll only be up for seven days (according to the site)...

http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=C8591BF44FBC91F8&rcpt=theohoff20@aol.com
Bacon
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sorry to derail, but this thread reminded me of this great robot chicken skit:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xLkYCs27ZgY
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