gal works at the town's whoar house but she is kind hearted and is trying to help brew by luring jeff into a death trap
Sunset on Innocence: The brew06 story
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gambo should play the mexican farmhand.
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jeff is the evil town lawyer who is seeking to collect debts left over by brew's deceased grandfather
I'm ok with this!!
i'm the dashing mexican farmhand that got put in prison for a crime i didnt commit. rather this crime was commited by cdub but in this town and at this age, the white man triunfs over the beaners.
however brew has concoted a plan to free me and run away
however brew has concoted a plan to free me and run away
can i be the pizza delivery guy
<-- comic book store owner
I'll play the part of an extra. Possibly someone who dies early on.
agct is the town sheriff. but he is as corrupt as can be. he has banded together with jeff and they have agreed to split the earnings. cdub is the third member of the party and he is actually the murderer of brew's grandfather
ct helped frame the mexican farmhand by placing fall evidence and well..by being the only policeman in town no one questioned his decision
ct helped frame the mexican farmhand by placing fall evidence and well..by being the only policeman in town no one questioned his decision
Derek?
really...cable guy, pizza delivery, and comic book store?!?! Geez guys.
Brew walks toward the door in a calm manner even though the knocks grow louder and faster as though an urgent message awaits. Gal is at the door with cheap mascara running down her face from the river of tears pouring out of her eyes. She has come to inform brew that her pet rabbit has died. Brew, knowing all to well of such an experience used to run a rabbit farm and was there to console gal. They embrace each other with a long yet gentle and soothing hug. A sudden breeze races through their hair drying gal's tears yet cooling her off in a way that erects a more positive feeling between them. Suddenly they gaze into each others eyes as though they knew exactly what the other was thinking.
[This message has been edited by 65532ag (edited 9/25/2007 1:27p).]
[This message has been edited by 65532ag (edited 9/25/2007 1:27p).]
nuke is the getaway car driver. in this poor town he is one of the few that owns a motorized vehicle (old beatup truck) and has agreed to meet brew and gal outside the prison in order to take them and me to his safehouse outside the town
ok, i'll be the shady cop instead of the pizza delivery guy. I like that better, but the pizza guy usually gets laid. So maybe i don't want to be the cop.
numbers... patience!
can i play uncle jesse....or cooter?
alias i hope you like all the ideas i am providing here
you are a very slow scribe
They both realized they could no longer hide their feelings. What once seemed strange, silly, and fanciful now seemed urgent.
Up the stairs they raced, hand in hand; they were waiting for a destiny to be filled. As they approached her bedroom, there was only the thought of their needs and a pale green glow of the light. Arm and arm they made their way into the room. Once they crossed this line, they could never turn back. But there was no stopping them now. Fingers are flying as they reach forward to explore new worlds. When they get there, there is a joy they cannot explain to one who hasn't been there. Until you have that pink KitchenAid mixer, you will not know how brew feels, now that she and her friend ordered one online
Up the stairs they raced, hand in hand; they were waiting for a destiny to be filled. As they approached her bedroom, there was only the thought of their needs and a pale green glow of the light. Arm and arm they made their way into the room. Once they crossed this line, they could never turn back. But there was no stopping them now. Fingers are flying as they reach forward to explore new worlds. When they get there, there is a joy they cannot explain to one who hasn't been there. Until you have that pink KitchenAid mixer, you will not know how brew feels, now that she and her friend ordered one online
flaith = farmhand
jeff = lawyer
gal = whoar
agct = the law
nuke = driver in some capacity
I'll work all of these in and use them. As to specific plot points, I don't want to give anything away. It's a suspense story, after all. But, I'll use them all.
No nominating yourself.
jeff = lawyer
gal = whoar
agct = the law
nuke = driver in some capacity
I'll work all of these in and use them. As to specific plot points, I don't want to give anything away. It's a suspense story, after all. But, I'll use them all.
No nominating yourself.
this is taking a very odd turn
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Tanya!
Also, I'm actually working at work today. I'll try for a few more installments, though.
Also, I'm actually working at work today. I'll try for a few more installments, though.
wow, what would you do with a pink kitchenaide mixer in the bedroom?
It is at that point they hear the sound of what appears to be a loud delivery truck. The roar works its way to the front of the property and then disappears. The two sit there for a moment in a confused state knowing an unexpected guest has arrived. The doorbell rings and brew races to her robe behind her bedroom door and throws it on. As she makes her way back down stairs she is greeted by the UPS delivery man. She then realized that she had not fully covered herself yet and that she has exposed her delicate flower to the delivery man. Somewhat embarrassed by the situation she feels dumb for not shutting the door behind her after gal had came over leaving only the screen door shut. The delivery man then exposes a package that brew knew was something important.
[This message has been edited by 65532ag (edited 9/25/2007 1:36p).]
[This message has been edited by 65532ag (edited 9/25/2007 1:36p).]
but my character was so great
damnit
damnit
alias you forgot about cdub = murderer
lol...I definitely want in on this. You can cast me however the hell you want.
Greatness...
Greatness...
WOW. Interesting turn of events.
Which ever male poster posts fourth after this one gets to be the delivery guy.
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cdub = murderer. Got it.
And gal (other that you being a whoar per reader input) only what I write counts, so you have yet to be introduced.
And gal (other that you being a whoar per reader input) only what I write counts, so you have yet to be introduced.
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