Sunset on Innocence: The brew06 story

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AliasMan02
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In a desperate attempt to save the GB today... chime in after each installment and I'll consider your ideas for the continuing story, or nominations for posters and the characters they should portray.

brew gets to be the main character because she generates views/posts like nobody's business.

It was a quiet evening in the small Texas town, and the air was thick with the perfumes of the day's labors gone by. Up and down the street, roasts were being pulled from ovens as dinner time approached. A farmer burned mesquite trees in his pasture. The grass had been cut and the neighbor's little yellow lawn sprinker rat-tat-tatted its rhythm over the distant roar of the highway over the hill. Brew made one last quick whip of the broom to exile the dust from the front steps, rested the handle against the frame of the front screen door, and wiped her hands on her apron as she took in the view of a setting sun behind a cloudless summer sky. For the first time in a long time, she felt a little flutter in her heart that told her she was home.

As the screen door slammed behind her, Brew took off her shoes and placed them on the little tiled area by the door before stepping onto the worn shag carpet. She untied the apron and hung it beside the old green refrigerator as she walked by, and reached for a clean glass from the shelf over the sink. As she filled her glass from the slow kitchen tap, she caught herself glancing over to the hutch in the adjoining dining room. One of the bottom cabinet doors was cracked open ever-so-slightly, a clue that it held an object just larger than was intended. She turned off the tap and walked toward it, standing before the pre-war buffet that once likely held a proud collection of wedding china, but whose racks above now set empty in front of the mirrored backdrop. At her knees was that barely-open cabinet, parted less than the width of the door so as not to reveal its contents, but still betraying that something lay within.

She wrung her hands and glanced over her shoulders before crouching down to the cabinet and reaching for the small brass handle.


I have an idea where it's going, but suggestions welcome, of course. Probably a bit long, but I wanted to set it up. I'll make future installments shorter.
x3nofox
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pg1

cliff notes, too
Dr. Devil Dog
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quote:
air was thick with the perfumes of the day's labors gone by


Have you considered writing romance novels?
aggienuke05
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why isn't she nekkid yet?
aggienuke05
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quote:
Have you considered not copying romance novels?



fify

[This message has been edited by aggienuke05 (edited 9/25/2007 12:33p).]
Jill
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She untied the apron and hung it beside the old green refrigerator as she walked by,


Obviously fiction because she wouldn't even know what appliance the refrigerator was.
Ag2005
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I'm pretty sure the GB will turn this into a porno in a matter of minutes.
Dr. Devil Dog
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Oh, you've read this one before?
Stoney
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DPA's severed head is in the cabinet.
aggienuke05
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stoney
AliasMan02
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quote:
Have you considered writing romance novels?
Well I AM a professional writer.
dereksadork
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i bet there's a dildo in there.

Alias, do me a favor. Make sure she gets Embraced by the end of this.
Slicer97
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when do we get to the reverse-cowgirl part?

or does jamotoe have that story copywrited?
brew06
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ohh ohh what's in the cabinet...what do I get?!?!?!

Gal...I know what a fridge is...I just don't know what to do with the stuff in the fridge
Fenrir
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Where's CDBU when you need him?
Jill
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gambochaman
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greatness
NeuroticAg
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This is what I hope is in the cupboard:

Hagen95
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What happened to the proud collection of wedding china?
MonkeyKnifeFighter
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My contributions:



















And there's my story.

[This message has been edited by TexAgs staff (edited 9/25/2007 2:03p).]
Kyle98
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Now this has promise!
AliasMan02
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As she had so many times before, Brew peeked into the dark cupboard as she slowly pulled open the door. She held her breath as the hinge creaked, her mind racing as she tried to convince herself that there was nobody around to hear it but her. A sliver of light fell on a worn, tan leather suitcase fastened on top with a wide steel buckle. She pulled back at the closing flap without loosening it and let the light from the kitchen reveal the bag's contents as she peered closer.

The green bills bound in bundles with twine caught the dull light. Maybe she should count it again, just to make sure she had it all... fifty-one thousand, one hundren and fifty dollars. Enough. Finally she had enough.

She suddenly lept up from crouching on the floor as knock like gunfire repeated on the front door in sequences of threes. Tap tap tap! Tap tap tap! She hurriedly shoved the bag as deep into the buffet as she could and made sure the door was completely closed before she noticed a pain in her right hand. In her haste and surpise, she had pulled it against the slightly-exposed screw that held on the old handle to the cupboard door. It wasn't bad, but a thin line of crimson had found its way to the surface of the skin and was starting to pool like teardrops behind her thumb.

Brew ran into the kitchen yelling "Just a second!" to another series of knocks at the door, grabbed a dish towel, wrapped her hand in it, and walked toward the door, collecting herself as she went.
dereksadork
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there's not enough Batman in this story.
AliasMan02
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quote:
there's not enough Batman in this story.
Give it time.
brew06
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NeuroticAg
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I'm disappointed she wasn't going for cleaning supplies.
AliasMan02
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Going forward, I really need other posters and characters they should play.
gambochaman
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damnit this is getting interesting
gambochaman
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flaith should play the big strong but very clumsy and slightly mentally challenged farmhand
aggienuke05
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i'll be the cable repairman

that's why they send me i am expert
aggienuke05
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gambo
gambochaman
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jeff is the evil town lawyer who is seeking to collect debts left over by brew's deceased grandfather
Maximus_Meridius
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I'll be the uber-hot but repulsive at first before becoming endearing and charming mechanic!
brew06
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Nuke...does a cable man really fit in this story?!?!
Rubble
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she really should be nekkid now!!
 
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