I normally really like Dana O'Neil, but a lot of this piece read like someone who didn't see us play a single game last year.
There was a mistake in the first version (before a few people pointed it out on Twitter) where she said Nebo's numbers dipped from his sophomore year to his junior year because he was no longer playing alongside Robert Williams. Which is kind of weird on a couple levels. (There's still a grammar error there where you can tell they changed up those sentences.)
It's mostly fine, and these offseason 'state of the program' pieces are hard to write because you're basically helicoptering into a program that national writers didn't pay much attention to at all last season.
But I agree with the overall assessment.